"Margot Pain", that title made me chuckle and I feel bad for the Shadow having to deal with the poor bumbling girl. I love the feeling of frustration I get from this.
You really convey his solitude beautifully in the second piece. He can be such a stubborn man, but he definitely has a human side and that really shines in all the right ways for The Shadow here.
I really like the tie-in with the movie scene in the first piece. The Tulku was probably one my favorite parts of the movie. I felt aw at the monastery scene, with the drums, the bells and the beauty of every detail in that location. The glimpse into The Shadow's mindset is impressive, and I like the comparison of his skills to those of children. It just really works so well.
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Date: 2009-05-11 04:37 pm (UTC)You really convey his solitude beautifully in the second piece. He can be such a stubborn man, but he definitely has a human side and that really shines in all the right ways for The Shadow here.
I really like the tie-in with the movie scene in the first piece. The Tulku was probably one my favorite parts of the movie. I felt aw at the monastery scene, with the drums, the bells and the beauty of every detail in that location. The glimpse into The Shadow's mindset is impressive, and I like the comparison of his skills to those of children. It just really works so well.